Waves are hitting the shore destroying the homes made by crabs. Earth seems to slide beneath Suparna when the salty alkaline water moves away from her. Her jeans is completely wet & sandy. She don't want to go beyond that, but her husband is calling her from a distance of 4-5 meters. Foreigners in two piece can be seen having their good time deep down the sea. Few are taking sunbath & their children are playing games like disk-throw and volleyball. Suparna is on her honeymoon trip to goa with suhaas on a one week package. Last Monday she got married to Suhaas, a handsome guy with a smart pay scale.
Two months back suparna's father found out about suhaas, a simple guy belonging to a high class family in the same cast, not indulge in smoking & drinking, highly educated & manager in reputed software company. After that Suhaas & Suparna met once in a highly formal meeting in which they discussed about their likes & dislikes. When it takes years for people to understand each other, isn't it unfair to decide your life partner in an hour meet?
Suparna always believed in friendship until the day her father brought the marriage proposal. "Why..but why i didn't let any boy come closer to me", suparna had asked this question many times in the last one month.
How can they send me to goa with someone they hardly know. They always asked tens of questions before any group trip. Now what made them to think I would be all safe with suhaas? Is it like they handed over their responsibility of guarding me or something in me, to suhaas & for which they are no longer bothered at all? Suhaas is enjoying, getting hit by the waves, he is cool but I don't like him because i don't know him. He may be pretending to be good. who knows whether the devil inside him can be trusted or not? Is he calling me to drown in the water? Last time i came here with all my friends, I enjoyed all of it, but i am not willing to believe some god damn guy just because he is my husband. Suparna's thoughts scambled when suhaas threw some water on her face.
"are you afraid of water?, come you are safe as long as i am with you, enjoy it suparna, take it easy", suhaas said. He is now facing me, all wet, in swim wear. "Look i think you are still not ready to accept me as your husband, so let me put it in simple. I can understand your situation because i was also not ready for this marriage. Family reputation & ideals prevented me to choose a girl by myself. I didn't want to hurt my parents by marrying on my own, after all they have their dreams", suhaas said sitting beside me, "But now when we have married, we have plenty of time to understand each other & make our marriage stable & happy. Apart from going along with this we don't have any option left, so better live with it & make it happen. so tell me, will you love me? will you trust me?"
"Ok!Ok! geek, yes i will. what option life has left for me too ", suparna thought & hugged him.
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ReplyDeletethnaks, I have read the story in mail. didn't copy anything other than the concept.
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